Examples in Bad Writing

From the book “Nine Princes of Amber” by Roger Zelazny:

“I walked among the shadows and found a race of furry creatures, dark, clawed, and fanged, resonably man like, and about as intelligent as a freshman in the high school of your choice – sorry, kids, but what I mean is they were loyal, devoted, honest, and too easily screwed by bastards like me and my brother. I felt like the dee-jay of your choice”

It should be noted he edited his own book.

~ by Barky on August 7, 2011.

One Response to “Examples in Bad Writing”

  1. Where do you find this stuff? Good God, man.

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